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People of Achievement: Scientists' Stories and Relative Clauses

A restrictive (defining) relative clause tells us exactly which person or thing we mean: 'The scientist who discovered radium'. Use who for people, that or which for things, and no commas. Reading stories of people of achievement, such as scientists, you can follow a pattern: a curiosity, hard work, setbacks, a discovery and its effect on others.

🎬 Step-by-step story

  1. Six scientists stand in a row. They wear blue or orange hats and hold a book or a flask. We want to talk about just one of them.
  2. If we say only 'the scientist', all six light up. Which one do we mean? The listener cannot tell.
  3. Add a clause: 'the scientist who wears a blue hat'. Now only three are left. The clause cuts the crowd down.
  4. Add one more clause: 'who holds a flask'. Now only one scientist is left. A clause that picks out exactly which one is a restrictive clause.
  5. Use who for a person. Use that or which for a thing, like 'the flask that is green'. Both give the exact identity.
  6. Your turn. Choose a hat and a tool. Watch how many scientists are left and how the sentence grows.

Tip: drag the 3D scene to turn it. Use two fingers to zoom.

🤔 Common doubts, cleared

Why can't we just say 'the scientist'?

There are many scientists. Without a clause the listener cannot tell which one, as the six glowing figures show.

How does a clause shrink the group?

Each clause is a filter. 'who wears a blue hat' removes everyone with another hat, so only three remain.

What makes a clause 'restrictive'?

It restricts the group until one is left and it is needed to know which one you mean, so it has no commas.

Can I use 'that' for a person?

In everyday English yes, but 'who' is preferred and sounds more natural for people.

Is the order of clauses important?

Not for the count. Try the hat first and the tool second or the other way round in the free-play step: the answer is the same.

What is a restrictive relative clause?

A relative clause is a small sentence inside a bigger sentence that tells us more about a noun. A restrictive (also called defining) relative clause tells us which person or thing we mean. Without it the sentence would not be clear.

Example: The scientist who discovered penicillin was Alexander Fleming. There were many scientists, so 'who discovered penicillin' tells us exactly which one.

Rules:

Who, that and which

The words that start a relative clause are relative pronouns.

When the pronoun is the object of the clause, you may drop it: The book (that) I read was about Marie Curie. When it is the subject, you must keep it: The book that changed my mind...

Reading stories of people of achievement

Biographies of scientists often follow a pattern. Look for these five parts when you read:

  1. Curiosity: a question the person could not stop asking.
  2. Hard work: long hours, small steps, many tries.
  3. Setbacks: lack of money, failed experiments, people who doubted them.
  4. Discovery: the moment the answer appears.
  5. Effect on the world: how the discovery helped others.

Examples to read about: Marie Curie, who studied radioactivity and won two Nobel Prizes (1903 in Physics, 1911 in Chemistry); C. V. Raman, who explained how light scatters in a substance (the Raman effect, 1928) and won the Nobel Prize in 1930; Tu Youyou, who found artemisinin, a medicine for malaria, and won the Nobel Prize in 2015; Alexander Fleming, who noticed that mould killed bacteria (1928).

Notice: each of those sentences used a restrictive clause to say which achievement.

Putting the two together: writing about a hero

When you write a short biography, use restrictive clauses to pack facts in one sentence: Tu Youyou is the scientist who found a medicine that saves millions of lives from malaria. Two clauses (who found..., that saves...), one smooth sentence.

Tip: do not use more than two clauses in a sentence, or the reader gets lost.

Try it: one-sentence heroes

Do this in 10 minutes. Choose three people you admire (a scientist, a teacher, a family member). For each, write one sentence with who and one with that. Example: My aunt is the nurse who stayed all night; she gave the medicine that lowered his fever. Underline each clause. Cover the clause: is the sentence still clear? If not, it is restrictive. Then use the 3D to practise: pick a hat and a tool and see how the clause narrows the crowd.

Key formulas and definitions

Worked examples

1. Join the sentences with who: 'The teacher helped me. She taught chemistry.'

The teacher who taught chemistry helped me.

2. Fill in who, that or which: 'The medicine ___ she found saves lives.'

That (or which). 'Medicine' is a thing: 'The medicine that she found saves lives.'

3. Which sentence has a restrictive clause? (a) My brother, who is ten, plays chess. (b) The boy who plays chess is my brother.

(b). 'who plays chess' tells which boy. In (a) the clause is extra information between commas.

4. Can you drop the pronoun? 'The book that I read was long.'

Yes. 'that' is the object of 'read', so 'The book I read was long.' is correct.

5. Can you drop the pronoun? 'The scientist who won the prize was happy.'

No. 'who' is the subject of 'won'. Without it the sentence is wrong.

6. Write one sentence about Marie Curie using a restrictive clause.

Marie Curie is the scientist who won Nobel Prizes in two different sciences.

Common mistakes

Practice quiz

1. Which word do we use for people in a restrictive clause?
2. A restrictive clause is written:
3. 'The experiment ___ failed taught her a lot.'
4. In 'The book I read was good', the dropped word is:
5. A biography often shows a person's:

Practice: answer these yourself

Type or choose your answer, then press Check. Use a hint if you are stuck; the full solution appears after you answer.

Frequently asked questions

What is a restrictive relative clause?

A clause that tells exactly which person or thing we mean. It is needed for the sentence to make sense and has no commas.

What is the difference between who, which and that?

Who is for people, which is for things, and that can be used for both people and things in restrictive clauses.

When can I drop 'that' or 'who'?

When it is the object of the clause (The book I read), not when it is the subject (The man who won).

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